* Sửa:
In June, i'm going to France. Mike and Jack are coming with me. June is a good month because it's hot. France is a big country. First, we are going to Paris. It's a large city. Every Thursday, there is a marker. Then, we're going to the seaside. Mike has packed his suitcase already
* Chú thích: Mấy chỗ gạch chân là chỗ sửa