1, Cities for a long time is an attraction for many people in the countryside.

2, In fact, there are many things account of this.

3, First and foremost, a big city is much exciting than a sleepy countryside.

4, It offers peple a variety of choices of education and entertainment services.

5, For instance, almost all big university have well-qualified teachers and prfessors are all in big cities

6, Besides, only in the city can people enjoy the colorful night life such as cinemas, night clubsm street food,..

7, Another plus for an urban life is the high standard of living

8, In such cities as Ha Noi, HCM, Da Nang, there are supermarkets, shopping malls where you can shop almost everything from vegetables to perfume and pearls.

9, Last but not least, cities provide people, especially adults with a variety of work choices.

10, Many industries are located there. It is also a promising land for youngsters to look for their luck.

11, To sum up, the attractions in a big city are still there and it still lures people everywhere to it. 

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1. Cities for a long time/ be/ attraction/ many people/ the coutryside.

=> Cities for a long time is an attraction for many people in the countryside.

2. In fact, there/ many things/ account/ this.

=> In fact, there are many things account of this.

3. First and foremost/ abig city/ much/ exciting/ than/ a sleepy coutryside.

=> First and foremost, a big city is much exciting than a sleepy countryside.

4. It/ offer/ people/ variety/ choices/ education/ entertaiment services.

=> It offers peple a variety of choices of education and entertainment services.

5. For instance, almost all big university/ well- qualified teachers/ professors/ are/ big cities.

=> For instance, almost all big university have well-qualified teachers and prfessors are all in big cities

6. Besides, only/ city/ can people enjoy/ colorful night life such as cinemas, night clubs, street food,...

=> Besides, only in the city can people enjoy the colorful night life such as cinemas, night clubsm street food,..

7. Another plus for/ an urban life/ be /high standard/ living.

=> Another plus for an urban life is the high standard of living

8. In/ such cities as Ha Noi, Ho Chi Minh, Da Nang, there/ be /supermarket, shopping malls where you/ can shop/ almost everything/ from vegetables/ perfume/ pearls.

=> In such cities as Ha Noi, HCM, Da Nang, there are supermarkets, shopping malls where you can shop almost everything from vegetables to perfume and pearls.

9. Last but not least, cities provide people, especially adults/ a variety of work choices.

=> Last but not least, cities provide people, especially adults with a variety of work choices.

10. Many industries/ located/ there. It/ be/ also/ promising land/ for/ youngsters/ look for / their luck.

=> Many industries are located there. It is also a promising land for youngsters to look for their luck.

11. To sum up, the attractions/ a big city/ be/ still there and it/ still/ lure people/ everywhere to it.

=> To sum up, the attractions in a big city are still there and it still lures people everywhere to it. 

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