I am very fun to present to you about our plan trip to a place of interest. First of all, after discussing, we came up with the decision to go to Thanh Co. The reasons for this choice are that Thanh Co is located right in Quang Tri town so it does not take much time to get there. Secondly, we will set off at 9 a.m on Sunday by bicycle altogether. On arrival, we will visit Thanh Co scenery and Relics of War. After that, we will have lunch together and chat with each other, sing favorite songs. Đat will bring a raincoat so we will wear it when the weather is bad. In the afternoon, we will wander around to Thanh Co and I will buy food, drink before going home at 5 p.m. I am looking forward to carrying this plan out with my friends this weekend.
*Sau khi sửa thì sẽ như này nha: (có những từ mình thấy nên lược bỏ hoặc thay = từ khác sẽ hợp lí hơn á)
I am very happy to introduce you about our plan trip to a place of interest. First of all, after discussing, we came to the decision (hoặc came up with the decision đều được nha) to go to Thanh Co. The reasons for this choice are that Thanh Co is located right in Quang Tri town, so it doesn't take long to get there. Then we will depart at 9am on Sunday by bicycle altogther. On arrival, we will visit Thanh Co scenery and Relics of War. After that, we will have lunch together and talk to each other, sing our favorite songs. Dat will bring a raincoat for us to wear in bad weather. In the afternoon, we will wander around Thanh Co and I will buy food and drink before going home at 5 pm. I am looking forward to carrying out this plan with my friends this weekend.