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I don’t like the cinema very much, but my friends all love it. Therefore, I often sit in the dark and try to follow the conversation on the screen while sweet papers and crisp packets are being opened enthusistically around me. It is a sort of annoying disturbance at the cinema, which means that I would rather get a video and watch it at home .Besides, there is no risk of getting cross because it’s impossible to hear anything or what is going on. Another problem is that I always try my own best to find a seat with a good view of the screen during the advertisements. Moreover, two minutes before the beginning of the film, the seat in front of me will be taken by a heavy-weight boxer who blocks out most of the screen and by this time, it’s too late to move, so this thing isn’t really the point to me.