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Parents feel that if their child becomes an artist , it will be difficult for him or her finance.
=> -Chỗ sai : him
-Sửa: His
->Parents feel that if their child becomes an artist , it will be difficult for his or her finance.
***Lí do:
dinance là Danh từ vì vậy Đại từ trong trường hợp này phải để ở dạng sở hữu.