Hello! My name is ..... Now I will tell my friends about my hobby is playing football when I was six years old. My dad taught me his hobby to play soccer. It's not an expensive hobby.
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He spends a lot of my time practicing this hobby.
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In the afternoon, he often goes to play soccer with his friends. He thinks that it's a good hobby because this hobby can make people healthier.
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He plays soccer very well. I think, in the future, he will be a good player. Goodbye!