+)Bỏ chỗ"because I want a younger sister." vì thừa nha bn.
+)"Both have jobs while my brother is old and he is studying in Can Tho city."Câu này chia ko đúng thì và cũng có đôi chỗ sai nên lược bỏ hoặc sửa lại cx đc.
=>Both of my parents are already jobs and my brother is studying in Can Tho city.
+)"My family likes to watch TV together at night and since then, I can have the opportunity to know more about my parents and that makes me love them more and more."bỏ and more
+)"I'm a sports person so I like swimming, badminton or basketball and I'm good at badminton and swimming so I take the time to practice them" tham khảo câu sửa
=>I'm a sporty boy so I like swimming,badminton or basketball and I'm good at playing badminton and swimming so I usually take time to practice them.
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