The means of transport I use is a bicycle
Almost every day, I often use it to go to school
- Có ''every day'' rồi mà often thì hơi bất hợp lí, theo mình nên bỏ "often".
Cycling to school is very useful
It can help me exercise every day
- to exercise. Form: S+help+O+to V.
Of course it can also protect the environment
But it also has a lot of not good things
- bạn thay bằng "bad".
For example, when we ride a bicycle we cannot ride a bicycle very far
- dùng "it" để thay, không nên lặp từ.
And cycling will not go fast, because bicycles are very slow I may have difficulty when bikes broke
- can