Dear Diana,
1. Thank you/ much/ your letter/ arrive/ few days ago.
→ Thank you very much for your letter which arrived few days ago.
2. It / be lovely / hear / you
→ It was lovely to hear from you.
3. I / be sorry / I not write / such / long time/ but I / be very busy.
→ I'm sorry I haven't written for such a long time but I was very busy.
4. As you know/ we buy / new house / September.
→ As you know, we bought our new house in September.
5. It / be /very bad condition / and it need / a lot / work.
→ It was in very bad condition and it needs a lot of work.
6. We finish / most / it now / and it look / very nice.
→ We have finished most of it now and it looks very nice.
7. Peter and I / decide / give / house- warming party / May 3rd
→ Peter and I decided to give a house-warming party on May 3rd.
8. You think / you / able / come?
→ Do you think you will be able to come?
9. Please give me / ring / let / know / you / make it.
→ Please give me a ring and let me know if you can make it.
10. I / really / look forward / see you again.
→ I really look forward to seeing you again.
Love, Jenny