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- Nên sửa một số chỗ diễn đạt: There are many wonders that you have to visit in my country but I suggest that you should travel to Phong Nha-Ke Bang national park because it's suitable for people who like exploring like you. => There are many wonders that you should visit in my country, especially Phong Nha-Ke Bang national park because ...
if you travel it in April or May => travel to it
enjoy the fresh and cool air and enjoy the beauty of the special structure of the cave with the rare stalactites => enjoy the fresh and cool air and the beauty ...
you can... (trải nghiệm) the cultural features of Phong Nha-Ke Bang national park => you can explore/ discover the cultural features of Phong Nha-Ke Bang national park ...