i have a burning desire that one day i will become a great chef. My mother is an ordinary housewife. her food is very delicious,so it is a great inspiration for me to make this dream. there are many reasons why i like to cook, it makes me happier in life and clears all my sorrows. i will always try my best every day to be able to make better food, closed my dream. hopefully, one day i can open my own restaurant. there i can freely create delicious dishes that bring everyone happiness, comfort and boldness in my heart everytime i eat. i believe that the more i strive, the more success i will achieve
em tham khảo nha nói chung bài của e không có vấn đề gì về ngữ pháp cả chỉ bị lặp and và dấu phẩy với chị sửa mấy câu hơi lủng củng